NaPoWriMo 22- A sadomasochistic? Haiku.

Love me. Or hate me.
Don't punish me with the whip
of your indifference.

(obviously, for this to work, you have to pronounce the last word: IN DIF RENCE. Got it??)

ALSO!  This is someone's poem in Spanish, more or less.  but I can't remember who?  This is my translation, which according to some, makes it my own poem, but really, I owe the theme, the feeling, the pulp, to the original person.  I wish I could figure out who!

Comments

  1. I think this is better:

    Love me.
    Hate me.
    Just don't punish me
    with your indifference.

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